Kate Sheppard Sick Sentences

These sentences are bad so I made them better!

Bad: The woman pulled the world along a road. There was a city ahead. The sky was cloudy.

Good: Heaving the blue and green sphere behind her, The woman trudged along the cobbled road. Glancing up, She saw the shining, bright city that she was heading to. Above her, dark clouds formed above her.

I loved doing this! See how you can make them better in a comment below!