Proofread work

 Hi Bloggers,

At the moment we have been learning proofreading. So I have re-posted my Sina & the Eel slides because we have proofread them. We were looking for things like punctuation, spelling and using is instead of was or vice versa. We checked it ourselves, a friend checked it, the teacher checked it and then we checked it again. So... Enjoy viewing the updated story of Sina and... the eel. Dun, dun, dun!

Blog ya later, Franny

Sina & the Eel🗣️

 

                         

Hi Bloggers✋, these are my recordings of Sina and the Eel. It's a Myth about how coconut trees came o Samoa. It's a story in my own words.

Hope you enjoy😄, Franny!

BREAKING NEWS!

 

This is my kiwi kids news report on an article - this article:

Link

Thanks for reading my blog, Franny🦥

...... Eels!

 Hi Bloggers, 

I'm here with slides informing you about eels... in stories, myths and articles. 

Eels are actually something I'm really scared of, but... this was great fun! 

Do you like eels? Answer in your comment! 

Blog ya later, Franny🦦🦥